A simple but cute outfit :) But although I think you tried with the picture and the outfit, I think you need to expand on the text. Explain the style, write a little about Hilary, your opinion on the outfit... I agree with Joyce, this is hardly a post, write a little more!
Great post, BUT, you should really add how much and where yuou can find the outfits. Because you should also include the price, and where you have gotten the clothes from. So if people wanted to have it, they would already know where to go. (:
The outfit is just a bit too simple and even if other people do this it doesn't make it ok. I like the idea though maybe you could try making your own outfits??
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The image you made looks great but this can hardly be called a post...
just a few words and 1 picture?
A simple but cute outfit :)
But although I think you tried with the picture and the outfit, I think you need to expand on the text. Explain the style, write a little about Hilary, your opinion on the outfit...
I agree with Joyce, this is hardly a post, write a little more!
Caroline [crazycaz07]
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please dont use other peoples material.
good idea, but you should post the what the items are as well so people could actually buy them if they like that style.
the use of other people's material is credited. everyone does it.
Great post, BUT, you should really add how much and where yuou can find the outfits. Because you should also include the price, and where you have gotten the clothes from. So if people wanted to have it, they would already know where to go. (:
I like the idea, but the post and outfit is just too simple :/
The outfit is just a bit too simple and even if other people do this it doesn't make it ok. I like the idea though maybe you could try making your own outfits??
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